Slowly…..
I dive into your body
And sweetness
Is all around
Slowly…..
You touch my soul
As I feel your aroma
Everywhere you go…
Our intense chemistry
Fills the room with desire
And passion
I hold
your heart in my hands
And with you by my side,
Life gets easy to stand and to
Understand
Slowly…..
You float gently in my body
And I can see love revealing
So many secrets
Again and again
As we lie in bed
Watching the beauty of the rain
Slowly…..
Like a magnet your body is drawn to mine.
You moan with utter delight.
With the rhythmical motions of love,
We conclude a heavenly night.
Subdued Flamboyance 
What a provocatively beautiful piece! Caro
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The intention is to show the softer side of making love. Thank you!
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You did so with class!
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That is just kind of you. Thank you!
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You are very welcome!
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(((awhoooo))) sensual words of passion and love, well done howls!!!
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And those were kind words of appreciation, thank you
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Beautiful and sweet!
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome
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Utterly beautiful!
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Thank you!
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😁
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Very passionate poem. You must be in love! Thanks for following my blog. I am writing my first romance! 🙂
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I am in love with love itself! And thank you. Also your work is admirable!
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Thanks for the kind remark! 🙂 I am in love with love, too! 🙂
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Makes me want to go grab my honey! Thanks for sharing your words! And thank you for visiting and following my blog.
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Haha you should! Everyone loves a sudden surprise of love. Thank you too.
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Good writing.
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Thank you & yours too is very eloquent
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This was very good
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Thank you!
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I am blown away by this poem ❤ So beautiful.
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Thank you. That’s satisfying for all the emotion I put in it.
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Lovely poem!! I really mean that. Here’s one of mine that compares…
Kerry E. Sullivan
St. Augustine, FL
kilverel.com
21 Lines
HEAVEN 1987
When life is new,
All’s in tune.
There’s a harmony of soul
And the sun shines a gentle glow
Upon your smiles.
What seemed like feet,
Is truly miles.
Holding hands,
A fragrant air
All one’s fears so soon forgotten,
And no-where to find a care.
So love comes then
And each one knows
That touch upon touch,
The feeling grows.
A quiet afternoon
By a lover’s side…
Your spirits soar–
Your bodies glide:
Here, even Heaven
Looks on in envy.
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Beautifully & eloquently composed. Thank you for sharing it!
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Thank you… to me these two poems run in the same sweet groove. I have more if you would like me to post one or two here… and yes, I know the difference between here and hear. 🙂
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Haha yeah I can see that. I would really acknowledge if you post here.
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(just so y’all know, I’m a 52 yr old guy)
Kerry E. Sullivan
St. Augustine, FL
kilverel.com
13 lines
TIGER 2005
I am an animal in a pen.
I’ve paced these walls for years…
A tiger, salivating life
Not knowing why I’m here.
I crush the ample bones and meat,
So surely thrown my way.
But whose cell do I darken, here…
Again, I cannot say.
Oh, pretty spectator…
Please don’t go away:
Come in here―
With me…
I won’t bite you, my prey…
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I loved it!
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I love your comment too 🙂
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That’s nice to know 🙂
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Oh my, as soon as I read the first paragraph and realized the theme of the poem I blushed..
But you handled it so sweetly! It’s a lovely poem!
Thanks for sharing!
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I take it a point not to make my poems appear sultry or vulgur or too gross. I try to show the beautiful side of making love.
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Poetry is love! Happay New Year!
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Haha thank you! Wishing you the same.
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I think I’m listening to the right music to be reading your blog https://soundcloud.com/libros-1/aerosol
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Sensual and beautiful.
I’m not a huge fan of poetry, I prefer prose. But this is absolutely lovely.
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That is very pleasing to know. Thank you for your kind words. Keep following.
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On my blog, Tales of… There is a dark sample of my writing called Beyond Repair, if you are so inclined to read. It’s only three chapters.
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Lovely poetry. If we are lucky, we feel like this with the right partner. Beautiful, keep it up.
Lucie
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Its all about feelings & emotions. Thank you!
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Very heart warming I would say. Thank for the follow. ❤ I followed you too for more of this beautiful piece 😀
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Hopefully, the beauty will be sustained in my upcoming posts too . Thank you!
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You are welcome my friend 🙂
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Your poem was very beautiful and made me feel full of love when reading it. Thank you. =)
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Love is beautiful indeed. Thank you too.
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Wonderfully penned 🙂 Soft, subtle yet sensual…
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That is too good to know. There is a beautiful side of making love too, not lustful, nor sultry, neither vulgar. I am just trying to portray the same. Thank you for your kind appreciation.
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Absolutely 🙂 and you’ve done it nicely…
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Thank you again & also I can see there we share the same surname :p
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Just beautiful. I love this poem.
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I appreciate the beautiful comment too. Thank you!
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Lovely. Beautifully written and very sensuous.
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All I can say is thank you! That’s what this poem was about.
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poetry of joy
and ectasy by you
words of passion
play a tune
igniting the fire
in a special way
the joy of love
you have written again
your deepest desires
and dreams come true
a poem of passion
words by you
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Beautiful! I mean just so beautiful! Its amazing how the idea of one poem can inspire someone to carve out something even better. Great!
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glad you liked it sometimes i read someones poem and i reply with poetry it just happens shouls bring me views into your site aswell
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That makes you a complete poet. Thank you
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thankyou i am in queue for comeplte poet after you my friend
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how lovely a piece. happy 2015
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Thanks a lot. You too.
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This is a beautiful piece !
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And this was a beautiful comment. Thank you!
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Great work. Enjoy:
Vertical readers
Very
Elusive
Rocks
Take
Instant
Coffee
Always
Lightly.
Rarely
Eating
Apples,
Devoted
Evangelists,
Rocks
Sacrifice.
Lonely,
Ore
Ventures
Everywhere.
Thoroughly
Ornate,
Few
Unknown
Crystals
Kick
!
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That was beautiful & thank you!
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I love your poem dougstuber– I have one very much like it:Kerry E. Sullivan
St. Augustine, FL
kilverel.com
38 lines
MOMENTS I 2006
Moments
Thoughts
Faces
Sounds
Moonlight
Or Sun.
Talk
Places
Dreams
Traces…
Memories.
Friends
Escape
Sleep
Awaken
Again.
Winning
Losing
Walking
Talking
Listening.
Sending
Feelings
Hectic
Ambitions
Never complete
Night
Dark
Day
Speak
Don’t say!
I Love,
Hate,
Fade away.
Happiness astray.
Survive
Play…
Why must you go away?
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Lovely! The completion is interesting & so is the framing of words.
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Your poem and my card speak the same language. Thanks for the follow. I will read some more!
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Its always pleasing to know when people want to read your upcoming posts too. I will try my best not to disappoint you. Thank you!
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Delightful, beautiful! thank you for the like and following 🙂
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Thank you too.
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Your poem is justifiably popular and softly erotic, the clip is a surprise, the poem could stand without it, but it does cement the vision.
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You’re indeed a very keen observer. You have even noticed the most minute things. Its always great to have such intellectual minds commenting. Thank you!
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delighted to have felt this piece!!! had my own visions, before the actual visual. 😉
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Its heartwarming to know when people can connect with the feelings of the poem. Thank you!
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LOVE this!!
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Thank you!
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Another good one!!
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Thank you very much!
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Thank you for following my blog 🙂
This is so beautiful. When you are reading something like this, when it is something that is so personal to the writer and yet it resonates with each individual that reads it also, that is a sign of true quality.
It makes me want to hold my partner and never let go, now excuse me while I go find him!
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You just managed to put a curve on my lips by that lovely comment. Thank you very much! There’s a beautiful side to making love too. I have tried my best to express it here & its a sheer pleasure when readers can feel the emotions of the poem themselves.
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Abhinav,
This poem essentially portrays the softer side of making love. You have beautifully brought the passion and pleasure that can be experienced through the delicate touch. Well written!
Yashika
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Thank you & I always make it a point not to make my posts appear vulgar or too gross when I compose a poem with such concept. Also, you have to use a very choosy set of vocabulary while penning it down & handle it delicately since its a sensitive topic.
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Does your choice of words reflect your true nature regarding such concepts?
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Well, these kind of concepts doesn’t invade my mind too often let me tell you first & secondly, I just consider it to be a beautiful moment. The best & most beautiful things are soft & delicate in nature in my view.
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Well said. Softness has its own beauty. 🙂 Please could you check your mail?
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I did a while ago & if you too take a bit of your time out to check yours, it would be nice. Also, thank you or I shall conclude it as my final thank you. By now, I am actually getting tired answering back your sweet & kind words of appreciation which are coming in a generous quantity :p
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I’m sorry for having bored you with my monotonous words. 😉
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& madam when did I mention, you did? :p On the contrary, I actually acknowledge it.
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I’m highly overwhelmed, Sir! 😛
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& I am glad to have you overwhelmed, ma’am :p
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Oh sure, Sir! :p
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Nice and sexy!
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Well, all I can say is thanks a lot!
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I am intrigued by your poem! fantastic! i am also a lover of words, a blogger, though i normally tell stories. mesmerizing stories. Thanks for following.
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It is a pleasure following a vibrant blogger & I am glad, my poems were able to connect it with you.
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Lovely poem. Thanks for the follow. I look forward to reading more
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Thank you too for your interest in my poetry.
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very sensual.
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Thank you!
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Your promise and honest expression of a beautiful feeling. Unfortunately like most common and presentations about sexuality it features the woman fueled with erotic ecstasy she is apparently rocked by the man’s thrusting. Let’s change it up a little show me his face! Then perhaps we can finally answer the question are men alive during sex!
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I don’t think a single gender ever dominates when a couple in love engages in sex. The best love making should have the best outburst of emotion from both.
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I don’t disagree and I didn’t think you would disagree I just wanted to point out that everybody who portrays sexuality and sexual enjoyment shows the woman and never the man what does that say about us?
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Well, that’s definitely true to an extent. What I feel is women connect to you emotionally as well & not just physically while having sex whereas many men lack the emotional connect. Quite possible it is the reason why most writings or compositions focus on female.
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Once again we are in total agreement. Being an extremely emotional man I have had the experience in my life that many women know how to be physically sexy but never allow themselves to feel intimacy with a man. It is men that experience women as emotionally present and yet while they are socially and with children frequently, (and with understandable historical justification) Do not give their hearts to men, only their bodies. Men have hurt them throughout history by practicing sex without emotion and justifying it by believing that women want the same thing. Men act out strength and competence but have never been taught vulnerability and emotional openness since that is considered a weakness in men. Speaking from experience I would say it takes more Courage for a Man to feel than it does to fight. You are a thoughtful and courteous conversationalist and have offered nothing but honest statements and thoughtful responses. I enjoy your poetry and hope you understand at this point that I was making a point about all of us as men and not specifically about your post, which by the way was very sensual, romantic, and erotic. Thank you for taking the time to talk to me.
Alex
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Hey Alex, firstly, the pleasure is all mine. Its always great to have a sensible conversation with an intelligent person. And this is in fact a very relevant topic. Now, after reading your personal point of view & through what I know a little of women, I feel many men do not understand the difference with making love & having sex. Both are different. Both initiate a different set of hormones. The former connects to your heart too, the latter doesn’t. The latter is mere physical satisfaction. But women want to connect to you emotionally as well. To them, there is more to sex than two bodies engaging in a physical act. Women are emotionally strong too my dear friend. And this is all I have to say!
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Thank you and as has been true throughout the conversation I have nothing to disagree with and what you say it is all true.
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I think Women Fail To deliver Emotions to the paper… But Men Do that perfectly. it is just a coincidence that men can not describe love scenes with fellow men… In that case, men writer, who happen to be good in it, describe Women in love escapades. Similarly, Men are free from the ‘whore Mentality’ if a man describes how he dipped his fingers into her wetness making a small sound escape her throat. That man Is an Icon, A hero, Real man… But if a Girl writes about how she spread her legs in pleasure and Urged Him to Dig Deep, deep into the gates of her belly… Such a girl is judged unfairly. What i mean is, men will always write about women in a way no woman will write about a man. You ask why? It is because, in literature, men have more freedom.
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I absolutely agree to your point & most of it is either related to male chauvinism or society norms & obligations. Men always had this habit of dominating the society & although the trend has reduced now but in literature & poetry things haven’t much changed. When a women writes about a sexual experience, it is oftened criticised. Even if the topics are handled delicately, they are still termed as over the top, vulgur or lustful. But I believe women can reflect emotions through paper as better than anyone else. They know emotions the best. Its they who bear a child & give birth to a child. Only the lack of encouragement & unfair moral obligations restrict them from expressing much about this topic which is often even referred to as taboo.
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Better than a DIY kit for the fake moralists as it would certainly help them to shed their cloak of false morality and experience true passion for what its worth as true humans are expected by nature! Well conceived, well constructed and well delivered, and hence, well received by like-minded souls.
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Thank you for such a wonderful comment. Great to always meet broadminded people.
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now that’s passion!!
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Haha thanks!
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Passionate and wonderful from the soul of love!!
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Thank you. It means a lot to get a feedback like that.
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