| You leaned over and kissed me
I felt myself go weak You leaned over and kissed me Even couldn’t I speak You leaned over and kissed me With a passion flowing free You leaned over and kissed me Intimacy that we could see You leaned over and kissed me A touch so delicate and tender You leaned over and kissed me A kiss I would remember You leaned over and kissed me I am sure I kissed you back You leaned over and kissed me A fire that could set million things ablaze You leaned over and kissed me You left me desiring for more You leaned over and kissed me My soul you did explore You leaned over and kissed me My heart now free from all pain You leaned over and kissed me Darling, please kiss me once again! |
Subdued Flamboyance 
Really beautiful..
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Thank you for your beautiful words of appreciation too.
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Nicely done, love this.
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Thank you whole-heartedly!
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You’re very welcome!
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Just want to let you know I Liked it even in the Preview. Great logline/opener
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That’s very satisfactory to know. Thank you!
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hmmmm….I love this! Nice one 😉
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Reblogged this on zuleykhapee's Blog and commented:
I love this one.
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Thanks a lot & it means a lot you found it worthy of a reblog.
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no, don’t mention! its my pleasure 🙂 keep it up!
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Aw this is a nice poem. Thanks for the follow and like!
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This means a lot. Thank you & following you is my pleasure.
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Sensual delight! Such smooth pleasure.
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A beautiful side of love 🙂
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Wonderful!
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Thanks a lot
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I like the repetitiveness in the poem. It gives the reader a musical rhythm to follow.
Thanks for the follow.
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Poetry without rhythm is like music without feel. Thank you!
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Beautifully written…artistic poetry 🙂
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Thank you for your beautiful words of appreciation too.
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Lovely poem! Thank you for stopping by my blog and the like. I liked yours in return.
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Have you thought about writing romances? This poem is a romance novel in the making, and it is beautiful. If I wrote poetry I’d be jealous. As it is–thank you for liking my blog.
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I am actually writing two novels out of which one is based on romance. But poetry is something which provides me inner satisfaction after I compose one. Thank you for your sweet & kind words. And yes, I did like your post. It was indeed quite good.
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A really heart-throbbing romantic and beautiful one.!
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The compliment was a pleasing one too. Thank you!
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Well, That, was a great way to start the day! Thanks!
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Oh, what a kiss! 🙂
Lily
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Haha, the delightful side of love it is.
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very beautiful poetry
of love passion
in a beautiful way
your poems show
love today
not just a dream
but words coming true
written from the heart
rhyming for you
such beautiful poetry
for me to read
written by you
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You’re quite the poet I can see there. Thank your for such beautiful rhythmic words of eloquent poetry.
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wel dear friend if it helps inspire you then ive done some good thats reason i started writing five years ago now have three blogs http://www.4valentines4words4poetryfouryou.com
http://www.myheartsingspoetry.com
http://www.iam the pompeypoet.com feel free to browze hope it inspires you more
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That is great to know. You’re an exceptionally talented person I can see there. I’ll definitely check them out.
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ive been called somethings in my time talented thats new one and appreciated many thanks
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a pleasure my friend a pleasure thanks for compliment
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I could tell I’m going to love your blog!!!
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Haha that’s lovely in itself! Thank you!
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Elegant!!
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Thank you!
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Wow! How many kisses is that? Probably more than I’ve either received or given in my whole life! You lucky guy. Thanks for liking my blog piece and for following my blog. I’ll do the same for you. Nice to meet you here on the tumbleweed-swept plains of cyberspace.
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You’re really witty & smart. I can confirm it now. Reading your comment after checking out your blog, I am quite sure of that. Good luck! Glad to meet you too.
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That was amazing! i could literally feel the passion, the tenderness! good job. 🙂
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Its an achievement in itself for a poet if the readers can feel the emotions of the poem. Thank you,
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You’re welcome 🙂
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I love this!! Thanks for sharing it!
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Thank you for taking your time out reading it.
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i think i need to send this to my lover!
he will understand 🙂
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Or why not just give him a beautiful kiss & he would love you even more 😉
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poetry for the world
xo
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Thank you!
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Great post!!
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Now all I can say to that is thank you!
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Very well done. I like the overall structure of the poem and how it keeps coming back to that initial moment of contact.
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A poem is no less than a song if it maintains a beautiful rhythm I believe. Rhythm blossoms the feeling you want to convey. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation.
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Thank you very much for following my blog! Thanku bcz that’s the only way I got to see your beautiful blog! 🙂
You’re an amazing writer and your enthusiasm for writing will take u very far 😉
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You’re so sweet, I’ll get cavities :p Thank you!
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Hahahaha don’t worry I know an excellent doc :p
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Thank you for following my blog ^_^
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Its quite interesting. Pleasure is all mine.
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Thank you for liking and following.my blog. You are quite the poet with a lot of talent! 🙂
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That’s really kind of you to tell that. Thank you & I am looking forward to read more from you.
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I smiled at the sweetness of that poem. Absolutely lovely!
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Always good to put a curve on someone’s lips. Thanks!
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I have never heard a smile described that way. Love it. You really have a way with words!
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Words are an expression in themselves. Aren’t they.
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I think it’s already been said, but this is a lovely poem. It would be nice to hear this put to music.
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Poetry is indeed similar to music if the rhythm is maintained.
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Loving the change to read some good poetry on here. Your flow is awesome 😉
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Poetry actually appears beautiful if a rhythm is maintained. It adds more feeling to the words. And thank you so much.
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Nicely expressed. There’s nothing like a sweet, passionate kiss.
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Yes indeed. Thank you for the sweet comment.
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Sounds interesting & as well as innovative. I’ll make it a point to make use of the privilege. Thank you.
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Beautiful and sensual. It evokes your feelings in the readers as well. Very well written.
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All I can say is your words were beautiful too. Thank you very much.
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Feeling come through well….Thank you for visiting my blog…
I can ask for the ketchup , But the pepper screws me up..:-)
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Haha thank you too.
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Beautiful poem!!
And liked your ” too shy to ask for a ketchup”… Ha ha ha.
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Yes, but you won’t find the shy element in my poetry though :p
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No, there isn’t. Liked your poems.
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Thank you very much
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Yes, that’s how it was! 🙂
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That’s great if you were able to connect your own self with the poem! 🙂
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Now that is a Valentine Poem! Well done!
Thought I would stop by for a visit. Thank you for following my website.
“I sound my barbaric yawp over the rooftops of the world.”
― Walt Whitman
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Haha thank you & its a pleasure following your blog too.
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“Well done, English language!”
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Haha, thank you!
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