A War is Never Over

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A war is never over,

It can never be,

The valor of the fearless,

Will stay alive till the last drop of sea.

~~~

A war is never over,

Though treaties be signed,

The memories of the battles,

Are never out of our minds.

~~~

A war is never over,

So when you welcome the heroes home,

Remember, In their minds they hold,

Memories known to them alone.

~~~

A war is never over,

For those, who have lost someone forever,

The loss of a son, a husband, a father,

No good memories can replace ever.

~~~

Copyright ยฉ 2015 AbhinavMajumder. All Rights Reserved.

 

 

 

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48 Comments Add yours

  1. so very well scripted.
    beautiful.. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thank you very much Kriti!

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      1. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. Nimmi says:

    S nice and so true…

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  3. This is simply said, but profoundly felt. Very good. I like your diverse themes.

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    1. This one is one of the best compliments I can ever get according to me. Thank you very much! I try to be versatile yet don’t believe in tampering much with the free flow of thoughts. Emotions are best expressed in the simplest form, I believe.

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  4. The GMLA says:

    war without treaty need is humane. people will always war with each other. It is a given. war with no arbitrary kill of the innocent.

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    1. This a fact in the present era. I do agree.

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  5. waynemullane says:

    There’s a lot of emotion in this, and so many aspects around war are given good attention. This is very poignant

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    1. Thank you for a heartwarming comment.

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  6. Mike says:

    So well done and so true.

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    1. Glad you could connect to that. Thank you!

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  7. This was really beautiful.

    I especially loved this line: “The valor of the fearless,

    Will stay alive till the last drop of sea.”

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    1. I am really glad by the fact that you could remember & mention those two lines. I definitely believe you liked it. Thank you so very much.

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  8. RmST says:

    You write beautiful poetry.

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    1. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation.

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  9. Jeanne says:

    Your gift of rhyme is so true! I have enjoyed reading one poem after the other of yours that have completely different themes and ideas.

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    1. Thank you! I do focus a bit on the element of rhyme. I believe that expresses the emotions well & nurtures the flow of a poem. Also I try to construct the various ideas pondering my mind provided I should believe in the concept.

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  10. Mike says:

    Elegant in concept, philosophy and execution. Nice work.

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  11. rosewater12 says:

    I enjoy your writing very much. My only “negative” comment is in regards to the eternal hatred the Japanese and the Germans do not seem to feel towards the USA. I look forward to reading much more of your poetry.

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    1. Thank you & quite agree to your point of view.

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  12. Very well written ๐Ÿ˜€

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      1. No problem ๐Ÿ™‚

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  13. Completely agree. May I reblog?

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    1. Sure. It would be a pleasure on my part.

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  14. Very nice. I agree with every word. I wish those in charge would understand that. Not only does a war never truly end, it never accomplishes anything except population control.

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    1. Yes indeed. Thank you for believing in the concept of the poem.

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  15. finleysmom says:

    Wonderful piece. We never forget our past no matter how hard we try.

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    1. Yes indeed. Past can become immortal memories.

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  16. sgrobins81 says:

    Hi Abhinav,
    Thanks for liking and following WowPow blog. I’ve enjoyed visiting your blog, too. I love this poem about war. “The valor of the fearless” is a great phrase.

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    1. Thank you. I enjoyed reading your blog too.

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  17. Lucy says:

    Beautiful. Simple. Well expressed message. Love it. Keep writing from your gut, even unedited writing will provide your readers with some raw material, and I’m sure they’d love it.

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    1. Thank you so very much for your kind feedback.

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      1. Lucy says:

        You’re welcome. You should be encouraged, you’re a good writer.

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      2. You’re really very sweet. Thanks again ๐Ÿ™‚

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    Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.

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  19. Wonderful write-up with much emotions ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ Every word can be felt deep inside.. Thanks for presenting this ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. And thank you for appreciating it: )

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