A war is never over,
It can never be,
The valor of the fearless,
Will stay alive till the last drop of sea.
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A war is never over,
Though treaties be signed,
The memories of the battles,
Are never out of our minds.
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A war is never over,
So when you welcome the heroes home,
Remember, In their minds they hold,
Memories known to them alone.
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A war is never over,
For those, who have lost someone forever,
The loss of a son, a husband, a father,
No good memories can replace ever.
~~~
Copyright © 2015 AbhinavMajumder. All Rights Reserved.
so very well scripted.
beautiful.. 🙂
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Thank you very much Kriti!
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🙂 🙂
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a soulful write. i like it. 🙂
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Thank you very much!
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Very nice 🙂
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Thank you very much!
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S nice and so true…
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Thanks a lot!
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This is simply said, but profoundly felt. Very good. I like your diverse themes.
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This one is one of the best compliments I can ever get according to me. Thank you very much! I try to be versatile yet don’t believe in tampering much with the free flow of thoughts. Emotions are best expressed in the simplest form, I believe.
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war without treaty need is humane. people will always war with each other. It is a given. war with no arbitrary kill of the innocent.
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This a fact in the present era. I do agree.
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There’s a lot of emotion in this, and so many aspects around war are given good attention. This is very poignant
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Thank you for a heartwarming comment.
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So well done and so true.
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Glad you could connect to that. Thank you!
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This was really beautiful.
I especially loved this line: “The valor of the fearless,
Will stay alive till the last drop of sea.”
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I am really glad by the fact that you could remember & mention those two lines. I definitely believe you liked it. Thank you so very much.
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You write beautiful poetry.
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Thank you for your kind words of appreciation.
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Your gift of rhyme is so true! I have enjoyed reading one poem after the other of yours that have completely different themes and ideas.
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Thank you! I do focus a bit on the element of rhyme. I believe that expresses the emotions well & nurtures the flow of a poem. Also I try to construct the various ideas pondering my mind provided I should believe in the concept.
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Elegant in concept, philosophy and execution. Nice work.
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Thank you very much!
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I enjoy your writing very much. My only “negative” comment is in regards to the eternal hatred the Japanese and the Germans do not seem to feel towards the USA. I look forward to reading much more of your poetry.
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Thank you & quite agree to your point of view.
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Very well written 😀
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Thank you!
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No problem 🙂
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Completely agree. May I reblog?
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Sure. It would be a pleasure on my part.
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Many thanks. 🙂
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Pleasure is mine.
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Reblogged this on Tales of Unwise Paths.
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Very nice. I agree with every word. I wish those in charge would understand that. Not only does a war never truly end, it never accomplishes anything except population control.
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Yes indeed. Thank you for believing in the concept of the poem.
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Wonderful piece. We never forget our past no matter how hard we try.
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Yes indeed. Past can become immortal memories.
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Hi Abhinav,
Thanks for liking and following WowPow blog. I’ve enjoyed visiting your blog, too. I love this poem about war. “The valor of the fearless” is a great phrase.
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Thank you. I enjoyed reading your blog too.
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Beautiful. Simple. Well expressed message. Love it. Keep writing from your gut, even unedited writing will provide your readers with some raw material, and I’m sure they’d love it.
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Thank you so very much for your kind feedback.
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You’re welcome. You should be encouraged, you’re a good writer.
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You’re really very sweet. Thanks again 🙂
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Wonderful write-up with much emotions 🙂 🙂 🙂 Every word can be felt deep inside.. Thanks for presenting this 🙂
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And thank you for appreciating it: )
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