Beasts that we call human

Like an apple that has fallen from the tree,
her soul was rotting.
Rotting…Deep in the emotions of the misery,
the feelings that never seemed to be setting her free.
You could say others have had it worse than her,
but until you take a few steps in the worn out path of her misery,
with the burdens she carried, only then can you unravel her mystery.
The scars always there never to vanish,
never to be repaired.
The physical pain may have vanquished,
but the emotional pain will always lay stagnant in her mind,
The pain that she endured through her teenage
made permanent cracks in the building blocks of her foundation,
to make her suffer the bitterness that was left behind,
forever in her mind.

She heard the footsteps approaching her,
And something inside her screamed this time it really isn’t right.
The words he was saying were ruthless and cruel,
And each time he hit her she sat there and obeyed each and every rule. Too strong, he was….physically.

Each and every swing felt worse and worse,
And then all she wanted was to be dead in a hearse.
He threw against the wall then proceeded to pin her to the ground
He hit her again, covered the mouth, not letting her make a sound.

She started to struggle and tried to release herself of his forceful grip.
Then the next thing she heard was a loud, horrifying rip
His hands were cold and she cringed at first touch.
She closed her eyes wishing the time would just pass by
And that next time she opened them she would be up in the sky
He pushed harder and harder and excruciating pain was all she felt
The next thing she heard was the unbuckling of his belt.

Something happened inside of her that she cannot explain,
She got this surge of energy and said, “F you, coward”
But the dirty mud was clawing under her nails,
The pain increased by seconds.
Pain thriving up her body,
Screams so loud,
She thought anyone would hear.
Anyone would,
should have heard her sorrow filled cries,
But no one came.
He lingered,
Tearing off clothes,
faster than the light shining down.
Tears poured out of her eyes,
Begging,
Pleading for him to stop,
But the pain only grew,
Till his pursue was finished with her.
The pain entering,
Was like ripping knives,
Like getting cut by a blade, when it heals,
It still leaves a scar.
The pain torched on her was inhumane,
Made by a soulless creature, a beast.
But there she still lay. Wilting. Crying.
Still begging for the help,
That never came. The help….that…..never came….

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59 Comments Add yours

  1. tmezpoetry says:

    Very poinent post, especially with the picture here. Doesn’t matter what a woman or man wears, even if it is to be the most skanky outfit, even if she does looks like a whore… there was never an ‘asking’ of anything in rape.

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    1. True. And hope everyone understands this very fact. Thank you for your feedback.

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      1. tmezpoetry says:

        You’re welcome 🙂

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  2. det-res says:

    What a way to come back. So gory and painful! Very untalked about issue. I guess it is hard to fathom/acknowledge and accept this happens. It is painful. And very disturbing.

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    1. Thank you believing in the portrayal of this sensitive issue & kind words of feedback.

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  3. One of the best poems that tackles this subject. Good work.

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    1. That was one wonderful feedback! Thank you so much!

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  4. I have no words………. your verse expresses it all so well.

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    1. I am really glad you liked it & thanks a lot for the wonderful feedback.

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      1. You are very welcome, thanks for sharing.

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  5. wonderful piece got me travelling along with it

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    1. Thank you very much for your feedback!

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  6. Ghazwa says:

    You are an awesome write! This was totally horrifying and heart breaking.

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    1. Thank you for your feedback & I am glad you could connect yourself with the composition.

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  7. Oh, good God. This is some powerful stuff. Very moving.Horrible beauty.

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    1. Thank you for the appreciation.

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  8. complexlyme says:

    i appreciate that you’re making this speak in the voice of poetry.

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    1. And I, appreciate the wonderful feedback. Thank you very much!

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      1. complexlyme says:

        always welcome. 🙂

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  9. Laurie says:

    Painful. Your talent is deep.

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    1. Thank you for the appreciation & I am glad you could connect with the composition.

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  10. SALT&STATUS says:

    This is a very powerful, well-written poem 🙂 such a disgusting thing that occurs in our society, and poems like this truly force people to think about this topic. Well done!

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    1. Thank you very much for your kind words of appreciation.

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  11. amanpan says:

    Well done in addressing a very fragile subject. I believe putting it in writing, as you have just done, would bring more understanding to this horrific crime

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    1. Thank you for your lovely feedback. And yes, I believe the same.

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      1. amanpan says:

        You are quite welcome.

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  12. Kae Bucher says:

    Thank u for writing this and following my blog… I have experienced and written some poetry about being sexually abused… thanks again..following u

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    1. I would surely check out your poetry. I wish you good luck! And, thank you too!

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    1. Thank you for the feedback!

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      1. Vivian Zems says:

        You’re welcome

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  13. Absolutely disgusting 😦 You wrote this so well in every detail though to describe what these victims must go through.

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    1. I express my opinions strongly & boldly through poetry. I hope my poetry can bring a positive change.

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      1. The dreams of any poet! I hope this one in particular especially brings about some change!

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  14. What a heart wrenching piece…

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    1. Well…I try to convey a strong message through my poems at times. “Beasts that we call human” was one of those. Thank you for the feedback!

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    1. Thank you for the lovely feedback!

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  15. This is so brutal and stark, yet poetic at the same time. There is so much pain, and you captured it well, I think.

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    1. Thank you for the precise feedback. Highly appreciated!

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      1. You are very welcome.

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  16. msjadeli says:

    Heart-wrenching sorrow at knowing even one has been attacked like this. We know it is many more than that.

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    1. …And we wish that no one must suffer like that.

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  17. This is raw and for a survivor I found it re-traumatizing yet inspiring to keep speaking out. Thank you.

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    1. This is a perfect feedback to get! The motive is to provoke a thought in the mind & heart of the readers. I hope we become more responsible as humans & do justice to our motherland. Amen!

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  18. Heart on Ice says:

    True. Very true. Tnx for liking my post🙏😊

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    1. Thank you too for the feedback!

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      1. Heart on Ice says:

        Anytime😊

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  19. Shanyu says:

    This is a slap on the faces of all of humanity violating the path of nature. Love the poignancy and a great and powerful post

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    1. Thank you for that token of appreciation. I write about topics I feel the most about. I know that a single person cannot change the world but maybe my poetry can change the world for a single person.

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      1. Shanyu says:

        Very well said. You have a truly inspired blog. Please keep writing. Peace ✌️

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      2. You too good luck with your writing. May it fill colors in your life and as well as others’. ✌

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      3. Shanyu says:

        Thank you so much. Very kind of you to say. Take care!

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