Delicate Ecstasy of Love

Slowly…..
I dive into your body
And sweetness
Is all around


Slowly…..
You touch my soul
As I feel your aroma
Everywhere you go…


Our intense chemistry
Fills the room with desire
And passion


I hold
your heart in my hands
And with you by my side,
Life gets easy to stand and to
Understand


Slowly…..
You float gently in my body
And I can see love revealing
So many secrets
Again and again
As we lie in bed
Watching the beauty of the rain

Slowly…..
Like a magnet your body is drawn to mine.
delicate

You moan with utter delight.
With the rhythmical motions of love,
We conclude a heavenly night.

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115 Comments Add yours

  1. Caro says:

    What a provocatively beautiful piece! Caro

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    1. The intention is to show the softer side of making love. Thank you!

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      1. Caro says:

        You did so with class!

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      2. That is just kind of you. Thank you!

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      3. Caro says:

        You are very welcome!

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  2. marcus says:

    (((awhoooo))) sensual words of passion and love, well done howls!!!

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    1. And those were kind words of appreciation, thank you

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  3. TheDarkestRaven says:

    Beautiful and sweet!

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      1. TheDarkestRaven says:

        You’re welcome

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  4. Ms. Vee says:

    Utterly beautiful!

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  5. tchistorygal says:

    Very passionate poem. You must be in love! Thanks for following my blog. I am writing my first romance! 🙂

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    1. I am in love with love itself! And thank you. Also your work is admirable!

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      1. tchistorygal says:

        Thanks for the kind remark! 🙂 I am in love with love, too! 🙂

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  6. dearmiracle says:

    Makes me want to go grab my honey! Thanks for sharing your words! And thank you for visiting and following my blog.

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    1. Haha you should! Everyone loves a sudden surprise of love. Thank you too.

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    1. Thank you & yours too is very eloquent

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  7. debb323 says:

    I am blown away by this poem ❤ So beautiful.

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    1. Thank you. That’s satisfying for all the emotion I put in it.

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  8. kilverel says:

    Lovely poem!! I really mean that. Here’s one of mine that compares…

    Kerry E. Sullivan
    St. Augustine, FL
    kilverel.com
    21 Lines

    HEAVEN 1987

    When life is new,
    All’s in tune.
    There’s a harmony of soul
    And the sun shines a gentle glow
    Upon your smiles.
    What seemed like feet,
    Is truly miles.
    Holding hands,
    A fragrant air
    All one’s fears so soon forgotten,
    And no-where to find a care.
    So love comes then
    And each one knows
    That touch upon touch,
    The feeling grows.
    A quiet afternoon
    By a lover’s side…
    Your spirits soar–
    Your bodies glide:
    Here, even Heaven
    Looks on in envy.

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    1. Beautifully & eloquently composed. Thank you for sharing it!

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      1. kilverel says:

        Thank you… to me these two poems run in the same sweet groove. I have more if you would like me to post one or two here… and yes, I know the difference between here and hear. 🙂

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      2. Haha yeah I can see that. I would really acknowledge if you post here.

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  9. kilverel says:

    (just so y’all know, I’m a 52 yr old guy)

    Kerry E. Sullivan
    St. Augustine, FL
    kilverel.com
    13 lines

    TIGER 2005

    I am an animal in a pen.
    I’ve paced these walls for years…
    A tiger, salivating life
    Not knowing why I’m here.
    I crush the ample bones and meat,
    So surely thrown my way.
    But whose cell do I darken, here…
    Again, I cannot say.

    Oh, pretty spectator…
    Please don’t go away:
    Come in here―
    With me…
    I won’t bite you, my prey…

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    1. I love your comment too 🙂

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      1. That’s nice to know 🙂

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  10. Oh my, as soon as I read the first paragraph and realized the theme of the poem I blushed..
    But you handled it so sweetly! It’s a lovely poem!

    Thanks for sharing!

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    1. I take it a point not to make my poems appear sultry or vulgur or too gross. I try to show the beautiful side of making love.

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  11. george-b says:

    Poetry is love! Happay New Year!

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    1. Haha thank you! Wishing you the same.

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  12. Joel says:

    I think I’m listening to the right music to be reading your blog https://soundcloud.com/libros-1/aerosol

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  13. Sensual and beautiful.
    I’m not a huge fan of poetry, I prefer prose. But this is absolutely lovely.

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    1. That is very pleasing to know. Thank you for your kind words. Keep following.

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      1. On my blog, Tales of… There is a dark sample of my writing called Beyond Repair, if you are so inclined to read. It’s only three chapters.

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  14. luciemuses says:

    Lovely poetry. If we are lucky, we feel like this with the right partner. Beautiful, keep it up.
    Lucie

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    1. Its all about feelings & emotions. Thank you!

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  15. akosirima says:

    Very heart warming I would say. Thank for the follow. ❤ I followed you too for more of this beautiful piece 😀

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    1. Hopefully, the beauty will be sustained in my upcoming posts too . Thank you!

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      1. akosirima says:

        You are welcome my friend 🙂

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  16. nikkif181 says:

    Your poem was very beautiful and made me feel full of love when reading it. Thank you. =)

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    1. Love is beautiful indeed. Thank you too.

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  17. Wonderfully penned 🙂 Soft, subtle yet sensual…

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    1. That is too good to know. There is a beautiful side of making love too, not lustful, nor sultry, neither vulgar. I am just trying to portray the same. Thank you for your kind appreciation.

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      1. Absolutely 🙂 and you’ve done it nicely…

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      2. Thank you again & also I can see there we share the same surname :p

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  18. Just beautiful. I love this poem.

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    1. I appreciate the beautiful comment too. Thank you!

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  19. Lovely. Beautifully written and very sensuous.

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    1. All I can say is thank you! That’s what this poem was about.

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  20. poetry of joy
    and ectasy by you

    words of passion
    play a tune

    igniting the fire
    in a special way

    the joy of love
    you have written again

    your deepest desires
    and dreams come true

    a poem of passion
    words by you

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    1. Beautiful! I mean just so beautiful! Its amazing how the idea of one poem can inspire someone to carve out something even better. Great!

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      1. glad you liked it sometimes i read someones poem and i reply with poetry it just happens shouls bring me views into your site aswell

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      2. That makes you a complete poet. Thank you

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      3. thankyou i am in queue for comeplte poet after you my friend

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  21. how lovely a piece. happy 2015

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    1. Thanks a lot. You too.

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  22. enydesigns says:

    This is a beautiful piece !

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    1. And this was a beautiful comment. Thank you!

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  23. dougstuber says:

    Great work. Enjoy:

    Vertical readers

    Very
    Elusive
    Rocks
    Take
    Instant
    Coffee
    Always
    Lightly.

    Rarely
    Eating
    Apples,
    Devoted
    Evangelists,
    Rocks
    Sacrifice.

    Lonely,
    Ore
    Ventures
    Everywhere.

    Thoroughly
    Ornate,

    Few
    Unknown
    Crystals
    Kick
    !

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    1. That was beautiful & thank you!

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    2. kilverel says:

      I love your poem dougstuber– I have one very much like it:Kerry E. Sullivan
      St. Augustine, FL
      kilverel.com
      38 lines

      MOMENTS I 2006

      Moments
      Thoughts
      Faces
      Sounds
      Moonlight
      Or Sun.

      Talk
      Places
      Dreams
      Traces…
      Memories.

      Friends
      Escape
      Sleep
      Awaken
      Again.

      Winning
      Losing
      Walking
      Talking
      Listening.

      Sending
      Feelings
      Hectic
      Ambitions

      Never complete
      Night
      Dark
      Day
      Speak
      Don’t say!

      I Love,
      Hate,
      Fade away.
      Happiness astray.

      Survive
      Play…
      Why must you go away?

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      1. Lovely! The completion is interesting & so is the framing of words.

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  24. The Lioness says:

    Your poem and my card speak the same language. Thanks for the follow. I will read some more!

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    1. Its always pleasing to know when people want to read your upcoming posts too. I will try my best not to disappoint you. Thank you!

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  25. Asanna says:

    Delightful, beautiful! thank you for the like and following 🙂

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  26. Your poem is justifiably popular and softly erotic, the clip is a surprise, the poem could stand without it, but it does cement the vision.

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    1. You’re indeed a very keen observer. You have even noticed the most minute things. Its always great to have such intellectual minds commenting. Thank you!

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  27. redhawk1967 says:

    delighted to have felt this piece!!! had my own visions, before the actual visual. 😉

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    1. Its heartwarming to know when people can connect with the feelings of the poem. Thank you!

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  28. rumadak says:

    Another good one!!

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    1. Thank you very much!

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  29. jlj1992 says:

    Thank you for following my blog 🙂

    This is so beautiful. When you are reading something like this, when it is something that is so personal to the writer and yet it resonates with each individual that reads it also, that is a sign of true quality.

    It makes me want to hold my partner and never let go, now excuse me while I go find him!

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    1. You just managed to put a curve on my lips by that lovely comment. Thank you very much! There’s a beautiful side to making love too. I have tried my best to express it here & its a sheer pleasure when readers can feel the emotions of the poem themselves.

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  30. yashika194 says:

    Abhinav,
    This poem essentially portrays the softer side of making love. You have beautifully brought the passion and pleasure that can be experienced through the delicate touch. Well written!
    Yashika

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    1. Thank you & I always make it a point not to make my posts appear vulgar or too gross when I compose a poem with such concept. Also, you have to use a very choosy set of vocabulary while penning it down & handle it delicately since its a sensitive topic.

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      1. yashika194 says:

        Does your choice of words reflect your true nature regarding such concepts?

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      2. Well, these kind of concepts doesn’t invade my mind too often let me tell you first & secondly, I just consider it to be a beautiful moment. The best & most beautiful things are soft & delicate in nature in my view.

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      3. yashika194 says:

        Well said. Softness has its own beauty. 🙂 Please could you check your mail?

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      4. I did a while ago & if you too take a bit of your time out to check yours, it would be nice. Also, thank you or I shall conclude it as my final thank you. By now, I am actually getting tired answering back your sweet & kind words of appreciation which are coming in a generous quantity :p

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      5. yashika194 says:

        I’m sorry for having bored you with my monotonous words. 😉

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      6. & madam when did I mention, you did? :p On the contrary, I actually acknowledge it.

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      7. yashika194 says:

        I’m highly overwhelmed, Sir! 😛

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      8. & I am glad to have you overwhelmed, ma’am :p

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      9. yashika194 says:

        Oh sure, Sir! :p

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    1. Well, all I can say is thanks a lot!

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  31. I am intrigued by your poem! fantastic! i am also a lover of words, a blogger, though i normally tell stories. mesmerizing stories. Thanks for following.

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    1. It is a pleasure following a vibrant blogger & I am glad, my poems were able to connect it with you.

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  32. Lovely poem. Thanks for the follow. I look forward to reading more

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    1. Thank you too for your interest in my poetry.

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  33. pndrgn99 says:

    Your promise and honest expression of a beautiful feeling. Unfortunately like most common and presentations about sexuality it features the woman fueled with erotic ecstasy she is apparently rocked by the man’s thrusting. Let’s change it up a little show me his face! Then perhaps we can finally answer the question are men alive during sex!

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    1. I don’t think a single gender ever dominates when a couple in love engages in sex. The best love making should have the best outburst of emotion from both.

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      1. pndrgn99 says:

        I don’t disagree and I didn’t think you would disagree I just wanted to point out that everybody who portrays sexuality and sexual enjoyment shows the woman and never the man what does that say about us?

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      2. Well, that’s definitely true to an extent. What I feel is women connect to you emotionally as well & not just physically while having sex whereas many men lack the emotional connect. Quite possible it is the reason why most writings or compositions focus on female.

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      3. pndrgn99 says:

        Once again we are in total agreement. Being an extremely emotional man I have had the experience in my life that many women know how to be physically sexy but never allow themselves to feel intimacy with a man. It is men that experience women as emotionally present and yet while they are socially and with children frequently, (and with understandable historical justification) Do not give their hearts to men, only their bodies. Men have hurt them throughout history by practicing sex without emotion and justifying it by believing that women want the same thing. Men act out strength and competence but have never been taught vulnerability and emotional openness since that is considered a weakness in men. Speaking from experience I would say it takes more Courage for a Man to feel than it does to fight. You are a thoughtful and courteous conversationalist and have offered nothing but honest statements and thoughtful responses. I enjoy your poetry and hope you understand at this point that I was making a point about all of us as men and not specifically about your post, which by the way was very sensual, romantic, and erotic. Thank you for taking the time to talk to me.
        Alex

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      4. Hey Alex, firstly, the pleasure is all mine. Its always great to have a sensible conversation with an intelligent person. And this is in fact a very relevant topic. Now, after reading your personal point of view & through what I know a little of women, I feel many men do not understand the difference with making love & having sex. Both are different. Both initiate a different set of hormones. The former connects to your heart too, the latter doesn’t. The latter is mere physical satisfaction. But women want to connect to you emotionally as well. To them, there is more to sex than two bodies engaging in a physical act. Women are emotionally strong too my dear friend. And this is all I have to say!

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      5. pndrgn99 says:

        Thank you and as has been true throughout the conversation I have nothing to disagree with and what you say it is all true.

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  34. I think Women Fail To deliver Emotions to the paper… But Men Do that perfectly. it is just a coincidence that men can not describe love scenes with fellow men… In that case, men writer, who happen to be good in it, describe Women in love escapades. Similarly, Men are free from the ‘whore Mentality’ if a man describes how he dipped his fingers into her wetness making a small sound escape her throat. That man Is an Icon, A hero, Real man… But if a Girl writes about how she spread her legs in pleasure and Urged Him to Dig Deep, deep into the gates of her belly… Such a girl is judged unfairly. What i mean is, men will always write about women in a way no woman will write about a man. You ask why? It is because, in literature, men have more freedom.

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    1. I absolutely agree to your point & most of it is either related to male chauvinism or society norms & obligations. Men always had this habit of dominating the society & although the trend has reduced now but in literature & poetry things haven’t much changed. When a women writes about a sexual experience, it is oftened criticised. Even if the topics are handled delicately, they are still termed as over the top, vulgur or lustful. But I believe women can reflect emotions through paper as better than anyone else. They know emotions the best. Its they who bear a child & give birth to a child. Only the lack of encouragement & unfair moral obligations restrict them from expressing much about this topic which is often even referred to as taboo.

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  35. mike7sedona says:

    Better than a DIY kit for the fake moralists as it would certainly help them to shed their cloak of false morality and experience true passion for what its worth as true humans are expected by nature! Well conceived, well constructed and well delivered, and hence, well received by like-minded souls.

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    1. Thank you for such a wonderful comment. Great to always meet broadminded people.

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  36. Toni says:

    now that’s passion!!

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