That very first day we met,
Its a feeling I’ll never forget.
All the experiences that we shared,
I knew right away that you were rare.
My love for you is like an undying flame,
I now have only destiny to blame.
You hurt me that night, you know, you did.
And I need you to know that I can forgive.
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Do you remember the day, the day we played in the snow,
Its the day, I wished for our love to grow.
But I am really struggling with trying to forget,
Because I still feel the same as the day we first met.
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What does forever mean to you,
When you even couldn’t keep it true.
You said, you would forever be there,
But were those words, just pulled from thin air.
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Did you actually love me,
Did you actually felt what I did,
The truth, the love, the loyal tears,
The betrayal, the hate and the fear.
But now my heart has healed.
All cuts have been sealed.
I have friends that are real.
And have provided me the much needed zeal.
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And you’re gone out of my life.
Unable to pierce me anymore with the heartbreaking knife.
I once thought forever was not just a word.
Thank you for proving me wrong,
But what you don’t know is
I know true love’s worth.
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Please read this! I’m sure you can relate!
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Thank you for finding it worthy of a reblog.
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Loved it. Beautifully written. Simple words yet they explain everything so deeply. That’s the magic of simple words you know. Keep it up.
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Simplest of words sometimes touch the most. They come directly from the heart with a smooth flow of imagination. Thank you!
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Yes exactly and that’s what I like about thd authors who use that 🙂
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Love this 🙂
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Thank you!
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💗
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wonderful
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Thanks a lot.
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This was spectacular! Loved it!!
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Thank you for those kind words.
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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That’s kind of you to say that. Thank you.
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🙂
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It’s beautiful! ❤
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Thank you!
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Beautifully written.!! Thank you for the blog follow too 🙂
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Pleasure is mine. Thank you too.
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A complete poem. I have read poems that either spoke about love or lost love. This is rare. The entire process of loving, losing and healing. Well written 🙂
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Whatever a poem is about, it should serve a purpose & as well provide a definite conclusion explaining the motive concerned. Most of us fall in love but there are varied aspects associated with it like what you mentioned. Thank you for understanding & explaining about the truest sense of the poem. It is highly acknowledged by me.
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Love your writes!!! 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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Abhinav,
You have beautifully described your emotions in a very simple manner. Yet your simplicity has portrayed the best of your love, your loyalty, your heartbreak and your strength. Very well written.
Yashika
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Its always a pleasure to read a comment by someone who observed so keenly. Thank you so much & the style is kept simple here because I wanted the thoughts untampered & with a smooth flow.
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It has been my pleasure reading your flow of words.
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Magnificent
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Thank you!
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What a nice blog that you have here. Thank you so much for stopping by at my blog, for the like and for the follow. May the Lord richly bless you more abundantly in the name of Jesus Christ.
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Always good to follow a blog which is inspirational & provides guidance. Thank you.
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Beautifully written piece, conveying the change of emotions.
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That’s actually what I tried to convey. Thank you very much.
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Relating to some like this me
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Thank you!
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It is very difficult to write so openly, and I admire the poetry.
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Thank you very much.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you!
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Nice work!!! Thanks for the ‘Follow’ 😀
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Thank you too.
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Heartfelt poem there! I saw you also write novels – will you blog about that too?
Thanks for following my blog – glad you like it! Will be dropping by here to check on what’s new 🙂
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I am so very glad to know that. It always feels great when people are eager to check your upcoming posts too.
As far as novel writing is concerned, I actually prefer them published through print media & not on my blog. However, I do plan to publish a few short stories here.
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Oh the pain. Wishing you much joy the next time round.
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Joy is in everything. Even in the most impossible things. All you need to do is extract it.
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Hmm. I wouldn’t say it’s in everything. I like to believe so but I am thinking of those imprisoned or suffering terribly and to tell them there is joy in everything seems a little bit….
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If grief never existed, would you value joy my friend? 🙂
There is no joy without sorrow.
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Yes duality exists. But joy cannot be found in everything, certainly not in the dark throes of depression. Duality exists but sometimes only one state of emotion exists at a time
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Every sorrow leads to your growth. Growth is joy. That’s what I mean when I say joy is in everything.
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I love your writing, keep up the great work.
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Thank you so very much for the encouragement.
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Nice! Thanks for following me.
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You’re welcome & thank you too.
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i have no idea what love is, however as i walk throughout the world you can feel love flow of those honest souls…
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Honest will be a person, a person who loved someone too dearly. Honesty is yet another aspect of true love.
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Reblogged this on Brittany Thoughts.
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Thank you for the reblog. I am really glad.
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It is beautiful!!
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Thank you for the beautiful comment too.
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Very nice
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Thanks a lot! 9
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No problem
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Ah!!! These words said it all for me too….
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That’s really pleasing to know when my poems can make readers connect with them.
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You are really awesome, Am 🙂
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& you prove your sweetness yourself by saying that.
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Wow!! Loved the way you said 😉 Thanko
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Love the way you appreciate. Thank you too!
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🙂
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Absolutely heartfelt and touching!. Great poem! Best wishes!~ Aquileana 😀
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I am very much pleased to know my work was able to touch your heart.
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This is so heart wrenching yet so beautiful! You are no part time casual
Poet, you are one good one! Will love to read more.
Kind Regards,
-Naima
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Well, thank you if you believe so. I was always more into prose previously but poetry is definitely close to my heart. Also, my poetry is a reflection of honesty & untampered thoughts.
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Reflection of honesty: the simplicity of your poetry gives it away. I really enjoyed reading your posts, Abhinav.
-Naima
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Very nice:) Thanks so much for visiting Homeflair!
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Thank you & surely, I’ll continue visiting it 🙂
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this is beautiful
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Thank you!
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Beautifully honest and real.
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Thank you very much!
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Beautifully and sadly true x
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Thank you for believing in the concept.
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And thank you for reminding me, and the inspiration x
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If indeed it could provide even a bit of inspiration, that’s quite satisfactory for a poet that is me.
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Another nice piece. Read through your bloag and love your style. Will be checking it out. Thx for the follow.
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Thank you to you as well.
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